The Masks of Erato

by
Roger E. Ball

Delivered to The Chicago Literary Club
October 6, 1997
Copyright 1997 Roger E. Ball

The novelist John Fowles once told an interviewer that he was often inspired to write a novel by a vivid image that would enter his mind seemingly from nowhere. He described how he once saw the clear mental picture of a young woman in eighteenth century dress standing at the end of a pier looking pensively out to sea. He had to write The French Lieutenant's Woman to find out who this woman was and what she was doing. On another occasion, he visualized a group of horsemen riding across a distant field. He had to write another novel to find out what they were doing.

In my own experience, the impulse to write a poem usually begins, not with an image, but with a few words, a thought that suddenly enters my mind, stays there, and will not let me rest.

This happened at Oxford in 1985 where I was taking an intensive three week course in political philosophy. We had been given a reading list that began with Hobbes and continued through Locke, Bentham, Rousseau, and several modern authorities. We were told to be familiar with this material and prepared to write and discuss two serious essays on assigned aspects of the subject.

It is a daunting experience to be thrown suddenly into the rather medieval atmosphere of an Oxford college, living in chambers, dining in the great hall, and facing the serious intellectual challenge of the Oxford tutorial system. It forces one to rearrange the normal view of reality, to adopt a somewhat altered state of consciousness. About two days into this experience a strange phrase swam into my consciousness: "Here I am stranded on a shelf of time." I wasn't quite sure what it meant. It seemed mysterious, but it would not go away. On the last day of the course, I was sitting on the college steps in that bittersweet mood that comes with parting. The phrase came back into my mind. It was iambic pentameter and probably needed to be built into a sonnet. I got out my notebook and wrote the following:

ON LEAVING OXFORD
Across the quad the roses fade abreast
The sunlit stones, grey spackled by the weight
Of patient years, of scholars and their quest
For knowledge deeper than the well of fate.
Here I am stranded on a shelf of time,
Sealed in the moment, stilled with stillness bought
From Oxford's air, from visions, dreams, that line
These ancient walks and speak of mysteries sought.
It cannot last, the wheel of time will start
And starting, take me to another shore
Where I will once again take up my part
And lead my life, part structured as before.
But I have seen enchantment in this place
And I am changed, and brave will changes face.

A similar experience happened about five years later. I had spent a long weekend at Esalen Institute, soaking up the magic of that wonderful location spread out along the Big Sur coast. During the day I listened to Terence McKenna describe his psychedelic experiences in the Amazon jungle, and discussed chaos theory with the mathematician Ralph Abraham. Nights, I soaked naked in the hot baths, the stars in easy reach of my hand, and the surf rolling up on the rocks with that grating roar that Matthew Arnold heard on Dover beach, and was reminded of Sophocles, who heard it long ago on the Aegean.

The weekend over, I needed a transition back to normal reality, I drove up to San Francisco and checked into the St. Francis. On an impulse, I called a woman that I had known in Paris. By good luck she was free and we arranged to meet at Chez Panisse, that wonderful restaurant that Alice Waters runs in Berkeley.

During that dinner it quickly became apparent that we were strongly attracted to each other. Thinking about it later, I realized that if either of us had made the least move toward the other, we would have ended by spending the night together. But the move was not made, the word was not spoken. We parted with a noncommital kiss and I flew back to Chicago. Two days later, like a crash of cymbals, I heard the question: "Why was nothing said?" Why indeed? When I couldn't stop the thought I knew that it could only be exorcised as part of a poem. I wrote the following:

A LOSS
Why was nothing said? We met
Warm welcome buzz of people, tables graced
With flowers. We sat, she smiled, her
Face remembered like a pang. The waiter came,
"The veal Normande with calvados and cream
Is choice." Her eyes deep pools of blue
That drew me down. "Risotto with the veal?"
"Of course." Her breasts moved under flowing silk.
"How goes your life?" Her hand and arm
Tanned, warm, and dusted with her scent
Lay on the table. "Have you read Foucault?"
"I hope to soon." Her hair spilled shoulder deep
To touch the promise of her dress. We shared
The politics and problems of the world
And talked and talked. But why was nothing said?

Of the nine muses, four concern themselves with poetry. Calliope and Polymnia must be hard pressed to find poets to inspire. Epic poetry has not been written for years, and although we are in a period of religious revival, the religious spirit no longer seems to express itself in poetry. On the other hand, Euterpe and Erato have never been more busy, though they must often be involved in serious territorial disputes.

The lyrical impulse, which is Euterpe's area, is the form wherein the artist presents his image in immediate relation to himself, thus distinguishing it from the epic, where he presents it in relation to himself and others, and the dramatic where he presents it only in relation to others.

If Erato is concerned with all of the varieties amd manifestations of the sexual impulse, as I believe she is, this certainly leads her into territorial disputes with Euterpe.

We can see her hand in my little poem about that inconclusive dinner. We can feel her influence even more strongly in the anonomous fragment that opens many anthologies of poetry:

Western wind, when wilt thou blow,
The small rain down can rain?
Christ, if my love were in my arms
And I in my bed again!

This despairing cry of pure sexual need is very touching. But Erato knows the difference between lust and love. She knows that love tempers lust, enlists it in the service of social stability and domestic peace. We hear this transition between love and lust in Robert Herrick's poem to his wife's clothes:

Whenas in silks my Julia goes,
Then, then, methinks how sweetly flows
That liquefaction of her clothes.
Next, when I cast mine eyes, and see
That brave vibration, each way free,
O, how that glittering taketh me!

These are the thoughts of a married man, or at least a man in a committed relationship.

But Erato is no prude and she wears many masks. She knows that sex comes in other flavors than vanilla. When needed, she has led poets down dark paths deep into the pagan wilderness of alternative sexual styles. One that used this help was Samuel Taylor Coleridge. In his "annus mirabilis" year of 1797-98 he wrote three great and mysterious poems. The first, and probably the best of these was " Christabel".

Coleridge had planned this as a long poem in several parts. In Part I he introduces Christabel, the lovely daughter of Sir Leoline, a baron rich. At midnight, on the eve of her wedding, Christabel leaves her father's castle to go into the woods and pray at the foot of an old oak tree.

Why would a gently reared young woman go out into the woods at midnight? This was not a sunny glade peopled by carefree nymphs. It was the dark, archaic forest of our worst dreams, filled with savage beasts and even more savage men. The toothless, mastiff bitch, from her kennel beneath the clock, sensed the threat, stirred in her sleep, and gave short howls. The poet sensed it too: He wrote:

Hush, beating heart of Christabel! / Jesu, Maria, shield her well!

But Christabel continues on her way, and we will soon learn what dark, unconscious impulse led her into that provocative and imprudent act. At the foot of the great oak tree she encounters Geraldine, a sado-masochistic, lesbian vampire whom she takes back to the castle and into her bed.

In 140 lines Coleridge takes the pair through gate, court, hall, and chamber - the successive steps of Christabel's surrender. When they arrive at the chamber the poem continues:

Quoth Christabel, So let it be!
And as the lady bade, did she
Her gentle limbs did she undress,
And lay down in her loveliness.

And now we see Geraldine:

Like one who shuddered she unbound
The cincture from beneath her breast;
Her silken robe, and inner vest,
Dropt to her feet, and full in view,
Behold! her bosom, and half her side --
A sight to dream of, not to tell
O shield her! shield sweet Christabel!


But Christabel was not shielded. Here is Geraldine again, and the end of Part I:

Then suddenly as one defied,
Collects herself in scorn and pride,
And lay down by the Maiden's side!
And in her arms the Maid she took,
Ah wel-a-day!

This is pretty strong stuff even today. Camille Paglia has called it blatant, lesbian pornography. We can imagine how it would be received in 1797. Coleridge was so badly frightened at what had come from his pen that he laid the poem aside for three years.

In the meanwhile, he circulated the poem in manuscript form to his friends. When Shelley read it he was so frightened that he screamed and ran from the room.

Coleridge took up the poem again in 1800, and wrote Part II. It is completely flat - the competant, routine work of a journeyman poet, but without the mystery and magic of Part I. Erato's contribution had been spurned. She did not return.

Coleridge wrote Kubla Khan, a better known poem, during that same magical year of peak creativity. You all remember the beginning:

In Xanadu did Kubla Khan
A stately pleasure dome decree;
Where Alph, the sacred river, ran
Through caverns measureless to man
Down to a sunless sea.

So twice five miles of fertile ground
With walls and towers were girdled round
And there were gardens bright with sinuous rills
Where blossomed many an incense bearing tree.

All of this is very light and lovely, a pleasant land, graced with the whimsey of a benevolent ruler. But suddenly and without warning, the mood changes and the poem becomes frightening.

But oh! that deep romantic chasm which slanted
Down the green hill athwart a cedarn cover!
A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon lover.

Next, we hear ancient voices prophesizing war, and then comes the warning:

And all should cry, Beware! Beware!
His flashing eyes, his floating hair!
Weave a circle round him thrice,
And close your eyes with holy dread,
For he on honey-dew hath fed,
And drunk the milk of Paradise.

The poem ends here. Coleridge tells us that a visitor from Porlock interrupted him on a matter of business and he was never able to finish it.

I do not believe in the man from Porlock, or if there was such a man, I do not believe that he was the explanation. Coleridge was far too productive and disciplined in his writing to make this plausible.

Nor do I believe in the critics who see in his opium addiction an explanation for the character of the poem and for its abandonment.

I think that this theory tells us more about our own attitude toward drugs than it does about Coleridge.

Coleridge used opium through most of his life, as did many people in England at that time. It never seriously affected either his work or his social life. He was a parliamentary reporter and influential journalist, edited and published two periodicals, dominated and enchanted private gatherings and public audiences, and had a large circle of friends that he regaled with marvelous stories and conversation. All this, while maintaining a formidable literary output.

No, I think that he started Kubla Khan remembering the long walks that he took with his friends William and Dorothy Wordsworth through the beautiful lake district of England, where there were many gardens bright with sinuous rills and many an incense bearing tree. But as the poem developed something -was it Erato? -turned his attention inward toward that dark area of his soul that was inhabited by a sexually ambiguous demon lover. And again he was terrified. The visitor from Porlock - if he existed -was a welcome distraction.

Why was Coleridge twice so troubled by this vision that he abandoned his poem? We will never know, but we do know that, behind an affable exterior, he was a troubled spirit, hampered by domestic unhappiness, financial anxiety, and ill-health. He had drifted into a loveless marriage, and never achieved union with the real love of his life, Sara Huchinson. He was constantly troubled by nightmares of sexual assault, often by large, frightening women. Here are two such dreams, from his own notebooks:

I was followed up and down by a frightful, pale woman who,
I thought, wanted to kiss me.

& again I dreamt that a figure of a woman of a gigantic height, dim and indefinite appeared smokelike.

This reminds us that to embark on a work of artistic creativity is to place onesself in the hands of the gods. You will be led to meet yourself. What you find there may be disturbing or even frightening.

Or it may only be enlightening. Last year I participated in a course where we discussed James Joyce's novel Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man. You will remember that, toward the end of that book Joyce's protagonist and alter ego, Stephen Dedalus composes a villanelle while discussing aesthetic theory with his friends. I became intrigued by the challenge of writing in such a highly structured form. Could I really write a villanelle? When the necessary first line swam into my consciousness I wrote the following:

VILLANELLE FOR LOST CAUSES
Tell me no more of wasted days.
Burned with the fires of vain regret
The wind of age around me plays.

For wasted chances memory prays
That they may once again be met.
Tell me no more of wasted days.

Lost broken love now past displays
The bitter pangs lost loves beget.
The wind of age around me plays.

The lash of time lost chances flays,
And doors are closed to needs not met.
Tell me no more of wasted days.

To find new paths I shan't delay
Nor cede the field of struggle yet.
The wind of age around me plays.
Tell me no more of wasted days.

The melancholy note of this poem does not seem very characteristic of me, but I did write it. We can no more deny our poems than we can deny our dreams.

By now you should have noticed that all of the poetry quoted in this essay scans, and most of it rhymes. This is not an accident. I believe that when poets abandoned formal structure for free verse something important went out of poetry, and that this loss deserves more attention than it has received.

The change to free verse began early in this century, and was part of the modernist movement that affected all the arts. For poetry, it opened new opportunities to explore deeper levels of meaning. This was beneficial, but in the process poetry lost some of its magic.

Poetry developed out of music and dance, both of them arts that link the human consciousness to the great rhythms of nature. Mickey Hart, the lead drummer for the Grateful Dead, has written a wonderful book, Drumming at the Edge of Magic. In this book he traces the history of the drum from neolithic times to the present, and explains how drumming has been used for religious purposes and healing, particularly by Siberian shamans and the witch doctors of Western Africa and the Caribbean.

There is a scientific explanation for this. It goes back to the principle known as entrainment, discovered by Christian Huygens in the 17th century. He saw that, if you put two pendulum clocks side by side and let them run, before long the two pendulums will be swinging together in perfect synchrony. There are many examples of this principle. Nature seems to prefer coordination.

So if you drum at a frequency close to the normal Beta frequency of the human brain, the brain locks into the frequency of the drum. Gradually slow down the frequency and the brain will slow to its Alpha frequency, which is the beginning of trance. Carry the process further and you may reach the Theta frequency, where lie dreams and visions. This explains the success of the shamans, and perhaps what happens at rock concerts.

In a much weaker form, poetry can have the same effect. Prove it to yourself. Take any long poetic passage, perhaps from Shakespeare. Read it aloud, concentrating on the music rather than the meaning. Do it again. If you are like me, you will experience a definite mental shift, a slight movement in the direction of trance. This is "poetry" at the edge of magic.

When Erato dons another of her masks she inspires poetry that celebrates the deep love within families, especially the love of parents for their children. It is probably fitting to close this essay with a poem that I wrote for my daughter's birthday:

TO MY DAUGHTER ON HER BIRTHDAY
Here with our clan assembled at the bar
Enriched with friends from near and distant past
I wish that I may somehow know at last
What magic made you be as now you are?

The chain of time is crushed and from afar
I look back down the course of crumbled years
At laughter, joy, hope, and hidden tears.
What magic made you be what now you are?

It was not me, nor other than your star.
That led you to the grace that crowns your reign.
We grasp too soon what is not ours to claim.
Your magic made you be what now you are.

Return to PAPERS
Return to Main Menu